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School Play Test

Problem-Solution Essay

Outline for Problem-Solution for " Too Much Homework"! 1. Use study hall 2. Use time wisly 3. Plan ahead 4. Ask for help

Too Much Homework

Every night my backpack is full of books and I can hardly lift it. My dad says " do you need all these books"? Sadly, I have to say yes. when I am on the bus I almost miss my stop because i have so many books in my backpack. (How does this relate to having too much homework? Explain or delete the sentence.) also I have to walk a block home. I get so tired. My problem is..... too much homework! my life would be so much easier if I had little homework. Expecially during the spring and summer days. What can i do

The teachers do give us a study hall. They also give us time in class. but I have so much homework i can't finish it all. I guess i will the teachers some credit but, why so much homework?

my solution is to use my time wisely and use the study hall given to me. but my time is short sharp(?) after school i have so many activites that i can't get my homework. since i am thinking of solution maybe i should qiuet an activity or space my time. school comes first.???

i also could plan ahead or ask for help in my subject. after school help will work too. maybe a touter if i really need it. i could get a calender to mark down my test, quizes, and homework assimment due dates. (Develop each of these possibilities)

i think i just figure my problem out. four easy steps to do when you have too much homework!

Ideas 3 Develop your solutions with more specific descriptions Organization 4 Write a statement of the problem at the end of the introduction and beginning of the conclusion Word Choice 4 With more thought, I bet you could use more effective words in your descriptions; Voice 4 Good use of dialogue, but not much detailed descriptions or vibrant verbs Fluency 4; Conventions 3 Several problems with capitalization, spelling, and sentence structure Total = 22=C+