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Sixth Grade language arts page Aaron's Gift TestRB

Problem-Solution Essay

Robbie Barr Problem solving essay

Rough draft The problem that I've been having is finding a topic to write about. I would have a week to do an essay and I would take up 6 days just thinking of a topic to write about so I would only have 1 day to write my essay!!!! Finding a topic is a very big problem that I have. One thing that I came up with was asking other people their ideas. But I did have one problem with that idea. Say I got 5 people’s ideas and I could only use 1 of them some of the people who’s ideas I didn’t use would get mad at me!! I found a solution to this problem I would make a book of ideas to save them incase I could use them in the future. That pretty much solved the problem. Basically all I do is ask my friends, parents, or really anyone who can give me an idea. Then I put it in my book for later use and I never run out of ideas! So I do not have a problem with finding an idea.

Of the two solutions that I came up with I think the book was the best! It gave me the ability to have a wide selection of ideas that I could choose from. I am glad that my friends got mad at me or I would never have thought of the book.

This WAS a huge problem but thanks to my great idea i have NO problems with finding a topic to write about. that has given me the time to write my essay nicely and over a longer period.Ideas

Idaes-5 Orgavization-5 Word choice - 4 you could have used more specific words in some areas Voice - 4 you did a good job adding some detail. Now try to add figures of speech to you writing. Fluency - 5 Conventions - 3 - Youahead a spelling error plus servreal numerals were used that should have been written as words. In addition, I had said since this was formal writing, you should not use contractions.

26 points = b+ You will be able to use this when you work on the research report. Keep this,