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1. When Bilbo has a disagreement with himself, it keeps the story going because your wondering if he will go on the adventure or not. That is why it keeps the story going. Marco, you need to look at the others' responses. This is not a wiki response. This is a sentence. Read Read Douglas's, Thomas's, Coco's, or Bell's. Thanks. ~ Mrs. Best

2. This is what happened in the forest. They where on the edge of the forest when the wolves came after them. So they climbed up trees because the wolves can't climb up a tree. Then the fire caught on to one the wolves and it spread to the other wolves. Then the goblins came and made the fire spread from the wolves to the trees where Gandalf, Bilbo, and the dwarves where sitting in, but luckily the eagles came and chased the goblins and wolves away and saved Gandalf, Bilbo, and the dwarves in just the knick of time to because the fire almost swallowed them whole. ?Where did a fire come from? Why did the goblins come? It was just the wargs at first... right? Better... but still too brief. ~Mrs. Best

Alex Kocab 3/4/11 Reading-6 I guess you could put it that way but that isn't the biggest reason why the story goes on. You couldn't said because of the problems they run into while they are going get the treasure back. You also misunderstood the question. You never picked a conflict. You also need more detail, but overall, good job.