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Sixth Grade language arts page School Play Test

Problem Solution Essay

What would the world be like if I was organized? I would Get my homework done, and have better grades. I wouldn’t have a problem finding anything, and my books and important papers wouldn’t get ruined or missing. Most importantly I wouldn’t be late for class. I have a problem organizing my things at school and at home.

I know that there is many things that make me have an unorganized locker. One and the main one is being rushed whether I am lazy and don’t want to put my books in neatly, or I want to get to recess and I rush to put my books away. Sometimes I even have to leave my locker ajar because all the books are cascading out of my locker. This is a big problem.

There are also many solutions to this problem. Including, keeping my assignment notebook neat so I know what things I need at the end of the day, but that means I need my locker organized. In order to do that I need stabled locker shelves, and binders that will have all my papers and books that I need in one binder. These are things that can easily be done.

There are also solutions that can be done at the end of the day. These are things that are not talking to friends before I have everything in my backpack ready to go, or even focusing on everything I need to be done. When this happens everything would be organized and my locker would be good as new.

This problem can easily be fixed. I might as well be more organized and have better grades in and out of school. It wouldn’t hurt to be organized now and it definitely not In the future.

Ideas 5; Organization 4 Good until the conclusion; Word Choice 4 Sometimes your writing is wordy in second and fourth paragraphs; Voice 3 "cascading" is a good image, but good use more images; Fluency 5; Conventions 4 Total = 25 = B